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Saturday, January 15, 2011

BEL assignment - if i have a superpower (100 words)

If I have a superpower, a power that I likely passion in is to have amazing strength. There is a lot of beneficial that I can get from it. With super strength I can handle my life easily. For example I can carry heavy things without burdening others. Moreover with such power I can personate girl in no time. I just show them my strength and for sure girls around the world will chase me all time. Next, with great strength the youngster would probably admire me and for that reason they will set me as their mentor. Hence with that advantage I manage to show them some goodness to motivate them to be kind to others. Time by time and day by day numerous people will recognize me due to my strength abilities and constantly various people shout me as their hero. With hero title stated on me I have to give commitment to my heroic work. I have to be more discipline to myself. Why? The life I have is different with other human being now. I have to be more organizing and re-schedule my time table. As a conclusion, to have a amazing strength is not only give me goodness but it’s also teach me to be more organize in my life routine.

i think this is more 100 words. who cares. hentam sudah. haha

4 comments:

Filzah.R said...

Ni haa some mistakes I've noticed.

AMAZING strength, bukan amaze.
BURDENING others, bukan burden je.
hero title STATED on me, bukan state je.
the life I have is DIFFERENT bukan differ je.
ORGANIZED bukan organizing.

:) amaze is a verb, so bila nak describe your strength tu guna amazing (adjective)
differ pon a verb, if nak describe use different (adjective)

afiq said...

ok ok. thx. aku pun x paham sngt. men bt jee. :)

[̲̲̅̅l̲̲̅̅y̲̲̅̅e̲̲̅̅a̲̲̅̅h̲̲̅̅] said...

hahaa. dgn lecturer sape ?

filzah , thnx for the info :D aku turut mempelajarinya . ecehh~

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